Pie
Girls and the Very Lonely Man by Giselle Renarde
Smashwords
and Amazon KDP, 2019
When
mild-mannered accountant Jerry Butler breaks a date so he can go
support his mother during a family crisis, Jerry’s girlfriend
Tracey throws him out. Instead of sympathy, his mother offers
criticism. According to her, he’s nothing but a useless wimp who
can’t commit or keep a relationship alive. Jerry makes allowances
for his mom; after all, her new husband Walter is on his death bed.
Still, he’s feeling pretty lost and lonely when he wanders into the
local pie shop. He’s all by himself in a strange town. Though he
still has a job in the city, he’ll be homeless when he returns.
Tracey has made it clear she intends to keep possession of the
apartment they’d shared. His many sisters are wrapped up in their
mother’s tragedy. Nobody really cares what happens to Jerry.
Lindy,
the curvy proprietrix of the pie shop, serves him the best blueberry
pie he’s ever had, then offers him a taste of her own ample flesh
as a second dessert. Jerry’s astonished, but not about to refuse
her gloriously full body. He doesn’t know what to think, though,
when they’re interrupted by a thin, stylish woman who turns out to
be Lindy’s wife Alberta. He’s even more confused when Alberta
comes on to him, too. Are the two spouses really so out of touch with
one another? Or are they conspiring together, using him for their
sexual satisfaction while deliberately keeping him off-balance?
I
absolutely adored Pie Girls and the Very Lonely Man. The story
is funny and touching by turns, filled with original notions and
unexpected twists. Jerry’s a sweet, appealing character without a
macho bone in his body. He’s as delighted to give pleasure as to
receive it. (It occurs to me now that having grown up with lots of
sisters may be partly responsible for his generous and
female-friendly attitude.) Lindy and Alberta are complicated, both
together and individually. Ms. Renarde keeps the reader guessing
about their real motives until fairly late in the tale, but
eventually we realize that Jerry is just what the two women need to
stabilize their fraught relationship.
When
writing erotica, it’s tough to avoid repetition and clichés. I am
a huge fan of Giselle Renarde’s sex scenes, which always seem
creative and fresh. In Pie Girls, she has outdone herself.
Jerry’s encounters with Lindy and Alberta are full of delightful
surprises. The three-way sex scene demolishes gender stereotypes in a
most satisfying way– satisfying both for the reader and the
characters.
I
highly recommend this sweet, sincere and arousing story. It will
leave you hungry for more.
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