Writing
a sci-fi/fantasy series was new for me as a writer. The first think I
realized as Book One developed, was that I needed a map. I started
out with a couple of countries but that quickly grew and the map kept
me straight on where I was in the story—literally. Now I publish it
in the front of each book because readers say it has been very
helpful. My daughter has drawn it for me and it grows depending on
where I get in the next book.
The
next thing I worked on was a list of name. many people have noted the
names in my books are unique in that they often reflect the
character’s occupation. That has been fun, it it’s still hard to
keep track of all thes people in a whole new world.
The
third thing is new words. Again, I began to develop a list, just to
keep the words and definitions straight to ensure I use it the
sameway each time. All of this information is in my Last War bible.
Each new book adds characters, towns and villages, words. It’s been
a lot of fun.
Prince
of Jiran, The Last War: Book Five
Blurb
A
Penrhy prince caught between duty and desire. Can he win the
impending battle?
Shandro,
Prince of the Penrhy tribe of Jiran, has been sent on a mission
across the mountains into Khandarken to bring back Princess Chinata,
a bride for Emperor Carlton’s Advisor.
In
exchange, Jiran and the Penrhy tribe are given a peace agreement,
protection against invasion by the Emperor’s troops. This seems a
good trade, as Carlton is hovering on their borders with his need for
more land. However, not far into the journey, it becomes apparent
someone is not adhering to the terms of the peace accord. Near the
tribal border, Shandro and his troops have come under direct attack
from unknown forces.
He
digs deeper into Chinata’s background to find strong ties to the
New Empire. Is it too dangerous to bring Princess Chinata into Jiran?
Or as her escort, does Shandro become her defender against the
Emperor’s troops?
Excerpt
It
had begun to snow again and the flakes were coming thicker, a steady
silent fall that muffled sound and blinded them as they rode. The air
was icy against China’s skin. Soon the wind picked up and it looked
like another blizzard setting in. She watched Prince Shandro ride
ahead to consult with his commander, then rein in and wait for
Haggskyll and Boz to catch up. She studied him as he talked with the
men, first gesturing toward the women and then ahead to the trail
leading through the trees.
He
was a handsome man in a very physical way with his broad muscled
shoulders, lean frame and golden-brown skin. The attraction to him
only got stronger as the days passed.
What would she do when they arrived at their destination? How to concentrate on being bride of the ancient Judson Lanser when this virile young man had guarded her through the mountains, and looked at her with such focussed attention her breath caught in her throat?
What would she do when they arrived at their destination? How to concentrate on being bride of the ancient Judson Lanser when this virile young man had guarded her through the mountains, and looked at her with such focussed attention her breath caught in her throat?
There
was a muffled shout up ahead, then a sharp bang. The men halted
immediately, all attention focussed on the trail before them. More
loud roars, and the guards were galvanized into action. Everyone
rushed to pull weapons from their harnesses or behind their saddles,
and crowd in around the women as others galloped forward into the
blinding snow. Shandro moved quickly, riding in her direction and
waving at his men.
“Go
back,” he yelled. “We don’t know what’s ahead.”
The
men were milling in a circle now, trying to herd the women back the
way they’d come. Horses neighed and reared in the confusion. China
grabbed her reins in one hand and the saddle horn in the other as her
mount sidestepped swiftly and plunged into the mount beside her.
Suddenly
new riders appeared on both sides of the churning group. They
materialised out of the trees, riding low in the saddle, weapons in
hand.
Mass confusion
ensued. One of the guards grabbed her bridle, dragging China’s
horse around to go back down the trail the way they’d come, and she
clung desperately to the horn as she swayed in the saddle. There were
more sharp sounds, what must be the firing of weapons although it
seemed muffled by the falling snow, and in the milling of bodies she
couldn’t see where they were.
Then
something hit her, knocking her sideways in the saddle. She reached
for the horn but her hand didn’t work. The pain arrived in an
overwhelming wave and she cried out low, unheard in the rush around
her. Looking down, she saw blood bloom on her cloak and ripple in a
slow wave down her arm.
She
was falling and someone was bellowing in surprise or rage, a wild cry
that followed her down.
About
the Author
Sylvie
Grayson loves to write about suspense, romance and murder and has
published contemporary romantic suspense novels, all about strong
women who meet with dangerous odds, stories of tension and
attraction. She has also written The Last War series, a sci
fi/fantasy adventure, the fifth book, Prince of Jiran, newly
released.
She
has lived most of her life in British Columbia, Canada, in spots
ranging from Vancouver Island on the west coast to the North Peace
River country and the Kootenays in the beautiful interior. She lived
for a year in Japan. She has been an English language instructor, a
nightclub manager, an auto shop bookkeeper and a lawyer. She lives in
southern British Columbia with her husband on a small piece of land
near the Pacific Ocean.
Sylvie
loves to hear from her readers. You can reach her at
sylviegraysonauthor
[at] gmail [dot] com,
on her website at www.sylviegrayson.com
or on facebook.
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5 comments:
Hello, Sylvie,
Welcome to Beyond Romance!
I'm in awe of people who can create entire worlds, complete with maps and languages. And I love reading books that do this well.
Good luck with the new release!
I too enjoy multiple characters with variety of names and places. But in saying that it's confusing when a main character Princess Chinata becomes China right from the start of the excerpt. Why drop the letters of her name. So yes I enjoyed the excerpt but....mhustvet@ hotmail.com
nice excderpt
bn100candg at hotamil dot com
I enjoyed the excerpt. I love reading a story with world building. Thanks'
debby236 at gmail dot com
Thanks for the comments everyone. And yes, Chinata becomes China to anyone who knows her well. It was fun coming up with the new world, still evolving of course, as Book Six hovers at the back of my brain.
Sylvie
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