Showing posts with label hotwife. Show all posts
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Saturday, July 11, 2020

The Slut has Arrived! #Giveaway #MILF #Bisexual #HotWife

The Slut teaser


Today is release day for my latest erotica tale, The Slut Strikes Back. Come meet Lauren, an over-sexed, under-appreciated forty-something blond bombshell and join her on her adventures as she discovers the limits (or lack thereof) to her sexual exuberance.

Happily Every After, for Lauren and her hubby!

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Blurb

“Find someone else to satisfy your needs.”

When her husband complains about her constant sexual demands, MILF Lauren Gordon is shocked and hurt – and determined to act on his instructions.

Lauren has never strayed outside the bounds of her marriage, but now that she has permission, she unleashes her voracious libido on her gorgeous girlfriend next door, the UPS delivery man, and anyone else who strikes her fancy.

Her husband called her a slut in order to shame her. Lauren wears the title with pride. When he comes home to find her gang banging her son’s buddies from the college wrestling team, he realizes he’s made a huge mistake. He wants his slutty wife back. But once you’ve freed the genie, you can’t put it back in the bottle.

If you love wild adventures of wanton women, you'll love The Slut Strikes Back.




Here’s a quick snippet to whet your appetite!

“Leave me alone.” Her quavering voice sounded unconvincing even to her own ears.

“You sure that’s what you want?” When he released her wrists, her arms fell limply to her sides. A sudden pinch to one nipple kindled a fierce bolt of pleasure-pain. “Me, I think you want something else.” Grabbing her hand once more, he pulled it under his apron and curled her palm over his rock-solid erection. “I think this is what you want.”

He felt huge, so massively swollen she wondered how he’d ever get his zipper down. Saliva gathered in her mouth. She licked her dry lips.

“Give it a squeeze,” he ordered, his voice lower and more seductive. “That’s all for you, babe. You want it?”

No, she wanted to assert. What came out of her mouth was a whimper of need.

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Monday, June 22, 2020

Realism in Hotwife Tales (or trying to avoid a cock and bull Cuck and Bull story) #Hotwife #Cuckold #Giveaway


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By Delores Swallows (Guest Blogger)

Lisabet has kindly invited me to do another guest post on her blog to coincide with the release of my latest novel, Unleashing the Bull.

This is the third and final book in a series called ‘Extramarital Pursuits’ – although when I released the first book I didn’t realise it was going to be a series.

That first book was called Operation Cuckold, and followed the adventures of a couple called Michelle and Harry. It was my first foray into the cuckolding genre.

I’d already written stories that included the subject of wife-sharing—though they were more ‘open marriage’ tales—and many other stories that included voyeurism, which I think is an important element in cuckoldry. However, I didn’t really understand the dynamics within a cuckolding relationship, so I decided to research the subject.

I visited several forums and spent a lot of time reading about all the things couples in the lifestyle get up to. It was enlightening, to say the least. I probably spent a lot more time than was actually necessary, but I justified all my hours learning about what worked for different couples by convincing myself I was being thorough.

For my plot, I imagined that Michelle visited the same forums I’d used and read about the sorts of things that some cucks like. I then had her employing this knowledge to her relationship with Harry without actually considering if it was what he wanted.


Harry got off on seeing her having sex with other men. He didn’t really want any of the things that many cuckolds crave — humiliation, denial, restraint — but he went along with a lot of things that took him out of his comfort zone because he thought they were what Michelle wanted.

The book came out in 2016, and I received numerous nice emails from readers saying they’d enjoyed the book, and that they’d found it authentic (as well as sexy). It’s my best-selling book.

In 2018 I decided to write a sequel, partly because of the success of the first book, but also because I’d grown fond of the characters and thought their story needed continuing.

During my research for Operation Cuckold, I’d learned that not all wife-sharing husbands were ‘cucks’. Some husbands enjoy simply watching their wife with other men without being told their cocks are too small, or being ordered to perform clean-up after the ‘alpha’ has left his deposit.

These guys are called ‘stags’, and their wives (though still hotwives) are referred to as ‘vixens’. Knowing that this was how my character Harry wanted to be, I called the sequel Stag Nights.


I had several scenarios I wanted to include in the second book, so I thought I’d try to improve my research strategy (there’s only so much porn-surfing a pervert can do). I decided to get it from the horse’s mouth.

As I mentioned earlier, I’d written other stories about wife-sharing as well as Operation Cuckold, and as a result I have numerous followers on Twitter who actually live the cuckolding lifestyle. I contacted a few of these to ask if they’d mind sharing their knowledge for a book I was planning to write.

Some were kind enough to agree, and I got both hotwives and cuckolds willing to participate. They were generous with their time, and I’ll always be grateful for the insight they gave me into the lifestyle.

I asked a lot of question — some general, but others more specific regarding certain scenarios I intended putting my characters through. The hotwives and cucks were kind enough to answer not only all of these, but also the follow-up questions I had after getting their initial responses.

Their answers were extremely helpful (and entertaining), but what really stood out—apart from how strong their relationships were—was how varied the dynamics between different couples can be. What works for one couple can be nothing like what works for another.

After Stag Nights had been written and published, I again received several emails from readers saying how accurately they felt I’d portrayed the lifestyle during the experiences of Michelle and Harry. This was all thanks to the people who’d been so generous with their time and knowledge.

At the start of this year, I decided to write the final book in the series. I re-published the first two through KDP, and called the series ‘Extramarital Pursuits’.

Unfortunately for Harry, it wasn’t until the final chapter of Stag Nights that he became aware of the terms ‘stag’ and ‘vixen’. I’d put him through over a hundred thousand words of being cuckolded before a very helpful bull named Ben explained not all husbands enjoy the humiliation and denial that Michelle had assumed was necessary in their relationship.

For the third book and final book in the series, rather than following Harry and Michelle through another set of adventures, I decided to do something a little different. Unleashing the Bull tells the story of how a nice young man called Josh becomes Ben, the bull from the second book.

Chronologically, it runs alongside Stag Nights, with both these books sharing the same scene – though told from different POV’s.

Since Ben was the knowledgeable bull who’d explained things to Michelle and Harry in the second book, I had to show in this one how he acquired all that information. And like in any other job, the best way for my bull to learn his trade was from hands-on experience!

In Unleashing the Bull, Ben services hotwives with a wide variety of dynamics in their relationships with their husbands. I like to think that readers will find it arousing and entertaining, and I’m hoping they’ll also think it feels authentic because a lot of the behaviours and kinks of the different hotwives and cucks my bull services were based upon the answers and insights I got from my research for earlier book in the series.

You can find out more about the latest book below. Meanwhile, I’ll give away one copy of each of the three books to three people who leave comments.

Blurb

When Josh’s ex-girlfriend asks to meet for coffee, his hopes that they might get back together are crushed by news of her whirlwind romance and marriage. He offers his congratulations through gritted teeth, still besotted enough to agree to meet her again just days later.
This time, Olivia’s more provocative, more flirtatious, and she tells him exactly what part of him she misses the most. Caught up in a rush of emotions which steamroll over his morals, he goes back to her upmarket townhouse and indulges in what he’s been missing. Her behaviour—coarser, sluttier—puzzles him, but that doesn’t stop him going back for more.

And then she tells him that her husband wants to meet him.
Josh is stunned to find that her husband is a cuckold who actively encourages their liaisons. Hotwife Olivia, with her husband’s help, convinces Josh that he has the physical attributes and stamina to service not just her, but several of her friends.
Rising to the challenge, he becomes Ben the Bull, and loves every minute of it. As he explains to a friend, his life is full of dates with gorgeous women interested in having hot, dirty sex and nothing more.
Surely, no red-blooded man could want for anything more than that…?

Excerpt

“Stand up, Ben.”

He placed his glass on a side table and got to his feet.

“Come closer.”

As he walked the few steps from his couch to theirs, Della uncrossed her legs and sat forward. She rubbed her hand over his groin, then undid the zip of his trousers and fished out his cock, which was already starting to swell.

“This is rather imposing.” She held it gently between her fingertips and glanced sideways at her husband. “Go to the bedroom and sit in the chair. I’m going to familiarise myself with this.”

Without a word, Samson got up and walked to a door on the back wall.

Della turned her gaze back to Josh’s manhood. She pointed it to one side, leaned in and planted a kiss on the side, near the base. She kissed her way along his shaft until she reached the tip, then parted her luscious red lips and took the head into her mouth.

Josh let out a sigh as she slid her head forward, taking more of him in. His cock was growing by the second and was soon a full-blown erection.

Della released it from her mouth but kept her hand wrapped around the shaft, her eyes now on his face. “I’m glad we’ll be skin on skin.”

“Me too.”

“Well, as much as I’d like you to fuck me here on the couch, I suppose we’d better go into the bedroom.”

He would have liked nothing more than to roll her dress up to her waist, spread her legs and fuck her right there with her shoes on.

She stood, her face close to his and her hand still gripping his cock. “Samsy’s a traditional cuck, with all the sissy trimmings.”

Although Josh didn’t understand exactly what this meant, he assumed it was her way of warning him there’d be some humiliation. “Okay.”

In the bedroom, which was as impressive as the living room with the same dark wood floor, Samson sat naked in a hard-back chair, facing the bed. A transparent plastic cover was fitted over his cock. It was the first time Josh had seen one in real life, having read a lot about male chastity devices while researching.

Della led Josh to stand facing her, immediately in front of Samson’s chair. She dropped to her knees and, still gripping Josh’s cock in her fist, looked at her husband. “Have you seen this, Samsy?”

Her husband’s eyes were fixed on Josh’s cock.

“Can you imagine how I’m going to feel when he pushes this into me?”

Samson swallowed, nodded once.

“It’s going to be a tight fit.” Della licked all around the head but kept her eyes on her husband’s. “Just picture this thing forcing its way in, stretching my pretty flower wide open and filling me up.”

She slapped the cock against her cheek several times. “I’m dripping just from the thought of being fucked with this, but I see you’re dripping too, Samsy.”

Josh saw a thread of precum hanging from the end of the device. Della caught it on her finger and pushed it into Samson’s mouth.

“Did I say you could dribble?”

“Sor—”

“Be quiet!”

Samson’s mouth snapped shut and he looked down at the floor.

“That’s better.” Della slowly straightened and stood face to face with Josh. Her expression softened. “Now, I think it’s time for us to resume assessing each other’s bodies.” She pushed his jacket back and off. “But this time we’ll do it without clothes.”

Josh stood motionless as Della removed his shirt and unfastened his belt. As his trousers slid down his legs, he stepped out of his shoes and trousers together, now naked. Della stepped back and appraised his body, then looked at her husband, who had another fine string of precum dangling from his plastic cock-cover.

She shared a grin with Josh. “I can hardly reprimand him—I’m dripping even more than he is.”

Gripping the sides of her springy, knitted dress, she pulled downwards. The neck opened and slid down her body, revealing a firm pair of perfect breasts. As the dress rolled further down, Josh saw her narrow waist and then the swell of her hips. She was completely naked underneath, her dark bush neatly trimmed. As she stepped out of her dress, he admired her smooth, muscular legs.

She stepped close to Josh and grabbed his cock, swiping the head against her belly. “Lie down, Ben. Samsy likes to get a good view of my painted lips going up and down on a nice big cock like yours.”

Josh lay flat on the bed, head on the pillow, and Della crawled between his legs.

She kissed her way up his thighs and nuzzled his balls, then took his cock in her hand and looked at her husband. “Ready for this, Samsy?”

Eyes wide and his knees shaking, he nodded.

Without glancing at Josh, Della lowered her head and took him deep into her mouth. Josh shivered and sighed as Della proceeded to treat him to some of the most intense pleasure he could remember. She sucked, licked, slobbered and nibbled until his legs trembled.

By the time she released him, both men were shaking.

“And now…” She kicked off her shoes and crawled up the bed, straddling Josh’s thighs without taking her gaze from her husband’s face. “I’m going to help myself to what I’ve been desperate for since my last bull.” She trailed her hand over her sex, then held up the wet fingers, rubbing the tips together to show both men how ready she was. “I’m going to have a big bull cock.”

She manoeuvred herself above Josh’s groin and reached down to swipe his cock through her outer lips, coating the head in her juices. She flashed him a smile before glancing at her husband. “Shall I?”

Samson’s entire body trembled as he gave a nod. Della smiled, then slowly impaled herself. Her eyes fluttered and Josh felt her tight heat envelop him. She groaned theatrically as she pushed down onto the entire length, her head dropping back and her mouth hanging open.

“Oh, Samsy,” she whispered, her voice breathless. “This is bliss.” She slowly rocked her hips, letting out moans and whimpers. “I know you want me describe how good it feels, but I’m just going to show you.”

She spread her hands on Josh’s stomach and began to thrust her hips quickly, riding his cock. “I’m going to show you how quickly something this long and thick will bring me off. I’m going to show you just how…”

Josh felt the grip of her climax.

Della grunted and thrust faster, her nails digging painfully into his stomach until she let out a gasp. “Oh, that’s better.” She sighed, shook her head and spoke to her husband, ignoring Josh completely. “I knew it wouldn’t take long to get off with Ben. What shall I do to him now?”

“Fuck him.” Samson’s face was solemn. “Twist and squirm and bounce on his cock.”

She smiled. “But you know what’ll happen if I do that.”

He nodded.

Josh felt like he was watching a well-rehearsed performance. They’d probably played this scene out with many bulls.

“What’ll happen, Samsy?”

“He’ll come.”

She raised her eyebrows, encouraging him to elaborate.

“He’ll come in your pussy. He’ll fill you with his cum.”

She nodded slowly. “That’s right, Samsy. He’ll fill me with his cum.”


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About the Author

Delores Swallows has many dirty thoughts, and during his free time he writes them down in the form of stories. Born and bred in the northwest of England, he has a commoner’s accent and a bit of a crush on his future queen (Kate, not Camilla!).

His stories often feature petite brunettes, high-heeled shoes and voyeurism. He claims he didn’t realise these were obsessions until someone pointed out how often they appear in his work.

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Tuesday, March 10, 2020

Review Tuesday: The Cuckold Club - First Date by Larry Archer - #fantasy #erotica #ReviewTuesday


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The Cuckold Club – First Date by Larry Archer
Smashwords and Amazon KDP, 2020

If you’re reading my blog, I’m assuming you enjoy sexy fiction. So you’re probably aware that cuckold/Hotwife stories have become one of the most popular sub-genres in erotica. These days, it seems that every author and his sister is writing cuckold tales.

In case you’re not au courant with smut fads, a Hotwife is a married woman who has sex with other, usually well-endowed, men with the permission and often the complicity of her husband (the cuckold). The extra-marital partners who service the Hotwife are termed Bulls, for reasons that should be obvious.

The women in this sort of relationship get the benefit of lots of hot, no-strings sexual pleasure. The cuckold’s payoff is more subtle and more varied. Some cucks are voyeurs, getting off on the sight of their wives being taken by someone else. Some are masochists, seeking the thrill of being humiliated by their gorgeous and powerful wives. One common theme involves requiring the cuck to “clean up” his Hotwife after her tryst with a Bull, licking the other man’s cum out of her orifices. In some variants, the Hotwife denies the cuckold sexual satisfaction, locking his cock in a cage or enforcing other sorts of sexual deprivation. She may criticize and shame him, comparing him to her Bulls and complaining about the small size of his penis or his general lack of erotic prowess. Some Hotwife/cuckold relationships border on femdom.

In fact, there appear to be many couples who actually engage in this sort of activity, and millions more who enjoy reading about it. However, this kink is not one of my personal favorites. First of all, I find sex purely for the sake of physical pleasure to be a bit boring. Of course, the essence of a fetish is the fantasy, the anticipation, rather than the acts themselves, but many Hotwife authors miss this point, focusing mainly on the Hotwife’s pursuit of the next big cock to fill her up. Second, although I enjoy some femdom, I actively dislike scenarios that include serious humiliation. While I can understand, intellectually, that some men (and women) might find this sort of scene a tremendous turn on, for me it has the opposite effect.

In short, I’m not about to go out and buy the latest Hotwife/cuckold title – unless it happens to be written by Larry Archer!

Mr. Archer’s latest release, The Cuckold Club – First Date, puts a decidedly cheerful spin on the popular sub-genre, with beautiful women and big cocks galore. Everyone’s satisfied, nobody gets humiliated, and there’s more than enough cum for everyone to consume.

The initial scene of this novella is one of the best things I’ve read by this author. Ted, the nominal hero, is sitting in a bar, watching a thirty-something bombshell flirt and seduce a college guy. Only gradually do we learn that the stunning brunette in the barely fastened wrap-around dress is Ted’s wife, Serena, who is in the process of realizing their mutual fantasies.

As Ted, getting more excited by the minute, drinks in the sight of his gorgeous spouse acting like a slut, he is approached by Roger. The fellow cuckold who points out his own red-headed Hotwife Tina, engaged in similar carnal pursuits. Roger gives Ted the chance to watch Serena and her virile young Bull through a one way mirror. The experience is a turning point for the couple, who proceed to drop a fortune on a high end computer, video camera and video editing equipment, just so they create their own personal, custom porn movies of Serena’s adventures.

As it happens, the cute technician from the computer store turns out to be as horny as everybody seems too be in Larry Archer’s world. She joins Serena and Tina in a lesbian lick-fest. Then there’s Helen, one of Ted’s colleagues from work, a brash but sexy MILF who’s literally up for anything. Things go from hot to hotter as the women take on five young studs, with every juicy penetration and every sticky eruption caught on film.

Though Ted and Roger are technically cuckolds, they get plenty of action. Their Hotwives are loving and generous, grateful for the opportunity to enjoy their Bulls as well as each other. Larry Archer likes to brag that every character in his books gets a happy ending. That’s certainly true in this one.

The final few chapters of the novella are somewhat less coherent than the earlier part. The author seems a bit confused about who is doing what – or maybe it was just me. I have a sneaking suspicion he might have been so turned on by his own tale that he got distracted.

And I really, really wish he’d learn the rules for using question marks!

All in all, though, The Cuckold Club – First Date, is a delight: hot, funny and unrelentingly sexy.

Friday, February 22, 2019

Out Now—I’m the One You Need by Rob Matthews (@robandtina1) #cuckold #erotica #BDSM


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Blurb

‘That hurt. I didn’t know if I could take it. But, at the same time, it was reassuring to be in your arms. You helped me get through the pain, even though you were the one causing it.’

Cuckold and hot wife couple, Rob and Tina, are back together, but they have a rough path in front of them. Rob knows Tina will never be satisfied with him and will soon be on the hunt for another man. But now her interest in sadomasochism has been awoken, is she looking for a stud or a master?

Fortunately, sexy young goth Charlotte is on hand to be their guide into the world of erotic pain and humiliation. Will Rob and Tina’s marriage survive beyond this latest stop on their Cuckold Odyssey?

A Cuckold Odyssey, book 4.

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Excerpt

Her mouth was wide open and her breathing was getting faster. I knew what that meant, and I’m fairly sure he did too. His expression was one I’d seen on other men’s faces while they were with my wife. He was trying to keep going until she came. Tina’s body tensed. She was very close. ‘Dirty little slut,’ he said, fiercely. This was enough to push her over the edge. She came with a shout. On hearing that, he relaxed and groaned as he came inside her.

‘Let me feel it pumping into me,’ she said. After a moment, he pulled out and sat on the edge of the bed. She couldn’t speak immediately. Raising her head to look at him, she said, ‘That was fucking intense.’ He didn’t answer, so she turned to me. ‘What do you say to Nathan?’

This was one of the moments when I regretted doing this with a friend. Nathan and I had played pool together. We’d chatted many times in bars, restaurants, and at barbecues. We’d always interacted as equals. And now I had to look him in the eye and say, ‘Thank you for fucking my wife.’

‘And?’ prompted Tina.

‘And for doing it better than I ever could.’

About the Author

Rob Matthews was born in London. He divides his time between Britain and the United States. He's the author of the Cuckold Odyssey series: Come Home With Us, I Can Do It Better, We Make Our Own Rules, and I'm the One You Need. He's also written the stand-alone book, Black and Blue - An Interracial Cuckold Tale. Rob is currently working on two more interracial cuckold tales, Talking Bull and Black Friday. Both are coming soon from Fanny Press, an imprint of Epicenter Press.

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Tuesday, March 13, 2018

Review Tuesday: Stripper or Nurse by Larry Archer -- #ReviewTuesday #hotwife #smut

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Stripper or Nurse by Larry Archer
Self-published at Amazon and Smashwords, 2017

Larry Archer’s erotic novel Stripper or Nurse begins with a heart attack. One of the patrons at The Fox’s Den, a high end gentleman’s club just off the Las Vegas strip, gets a bit too excited watching the lovely dancers and keels over. But never fear. All the strippers at the Den are trained in CPR. Dancers Peaches and Monique take turns working on the customer, keeping him alive until the ambulance arrives—though when he regains consciousness to find himself looking up at two gorgeous, naked girls, Tom wonders whether he has died and gone to heaven.

Concerned about Tom’s welfare, the two girls visit him at the hospital, only to have a run-in with Tom’s rather conservative wife Suzanne. Both jealous and worried, she blames the strip club for her husband’s condition and verbally shreds the young women who actually saved his life. When Suzanne shows up at the strip club to confront the management, she discovers that that the place is not at all what she’d imagined. Instead of a sleazy establishment that takes advantage of women, objectifying them and forcing them into sex, the Fox’s Den turns out to be classy and relaxed, a haven for exhibitionist gals who love showing off. The sensual, sex-drenched atmosphere almost immediately starts to work its magic on the unsuspecting housewife. Before she knows it, she’s fondling the breasts of the scantily clad club valets, wearing scandalously revealing clothing, masturbating in public, and offering her body to men and women alike.

Meanwhile, Tom receives very personal attention from a bevy of horny nurses, as well as Foxy Archer, wife of The Fox’s Den proprietor.

Stripper or Nurse features almost non-stop sex, with a lot of girl-on-girl action and swapping of bodily fluids. At the same time, it’s plotted quite tightly. Larry Archer manages to keep the focus on Suzanne’s enthusiastic transformation from prude to slut. He does an excellent job portraying both her doubts and her irresistible attraction to her new identity as a perpetually-aroused, anything-goes hotwife.

Overall, I really enjoyed Stripper or Nurse. I love the uninhibited sexuality in the story (indeed, in all Larry Archer’s stories), and the generous, affectionate mood. I’ve been turned off in the past by some “cuckold” tales that seem to belittle or denigrate the man involved. In this novel, Tom gets plenty of sex (despite being hospitalized through the entire book!), even as he watches (in high definition video) his wife get passed around to voracious females and well-hung males.

I did find the ending a bit abrupt. Somehow I expected a bit more tidying of loose ends. In the first half of the book, Suzanne keeps talking about a Saturday Couples Night party at the Den, and meeting people who plan to join in the Saturday fun. I expected that to be the big-bang (so to speak) ending, so I was a bit disappointed when the tale ended after a more private sex scene—if you can call a video-recorded butt-fucking “private”!

Anyway, I had a good time, as I almost always do when I enter Larry’s world of good-natured promiscuity. I’m certain I’ll be back.

Tuesday, October 11, 2016

Review Tuesday: The Watchers by LarryArcher (#hotwife #smut #review @Archer_Larry)

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The Watchers: Cuckold/Hotwife #5 by Larry Archer
Smashwords and Amazon Digital Publishing, 2016


Poor Gene! He has the most boring job in the universe. He’s married to a beautiful but prudish woman who won’t give him head or try anything adventurous. Fate has even short-changed him in the area of masculine endowment.

However, Gene’s life is about to change. While sitting exhausted in a hotel bar, trying to recover from a mind-numbing seminar about insurance adjusting, he overhears two men discussing an illicit sex show. Taking pity on him, they share information about the location and the rules. In short order, Gene is sitting on one of the couches ranged around the edges of the show venue, watching incredibly filthy sexual activities unfold on the bed in the center.

He’s not just a spectator either. The voluptuous MILF Pam, a regular at these events, takes him in hand, both figuratively and literally, helping to make him more comfortable.

Meanwhile a petite blonde who seems strangely familiar moves around the perimeter, giving blow jobs to every attendee including Gene. Before long she’s been enticed into the spot light and is taking on both men and women. Only when Gene steps into the center of things and penetrates her rear orifice does he realize with a shock that this semen-drenched slut is his wife Theresa.

The Watchers is not erotic romance. It’s not literary erotica. It’s smut, plain and simple, intentionally designed for maximum arousal with minimum complications. This is not a criticism. Sometimes pure porn is what you want, and when you do, Larry Archer is the man to give it to you.

There’s not much plot, though Mr. Archer does give us some sense for the individual histories and preferences of different characters. The sex scenes are raw and rambunctious, with lots of F/F action and a preference for copious bodily fluids. The point of view shifts from one character to another (but not in a way that confuses), leaving the reader with no doubt that every character is enjoying the action.

To be honest, I find most smut of this type boring, but Mr. Archer’s tales stand out due to his personal enthusiasm for sex, his humor and his obvious respect for women. The Watchers focuses primarily on female pleasure. Not that the male characters don’t get off—they do, repeatedly—but the author loves to linger describing the ladies, what they’re doing to one another, what they want and how they feel. Furthermore, his women are not carbon copies of one another. There’s Stephanie, for instance, a building security guard who becomes entangled with the Amazonian beauty Foxy and finds herself acting out the lesbian fantasies she has never dared to share. Or Theresa herself, a good Catholic girl who discovers her inner slut when she gets her first taste of cum. Or fiery-haired Chrissy, big busted and dominant, a sort of ring leader who adores the process of “corrupting” these innocents and bringing them over to the dark side.

The women in Mr. Archer’s story are quite thoroughly used, but there’s no question that they are the ones calling the shots.

The author’s subtle humor helps keep the mood light. Foxy’s husband Larry, a recurring character in the author’s tales, runs one of Vegas’ top strip clubs. On the night of Gene’s initiation at the sex show, Larry’s absent because he’s hosting a convention of Japanese businessmen at his club. Here’s his description, afterward:

Larry pulled into his parking spot and laid his head on the steering wheel for a minute. The big group of Japanese businessmen had taken a toll on him. He wanted them to have fun but they were often a pain in the ass.

They had demanded attention from all the girls and were used to their women being subservient. Larry's girls were to a fault, women's libbers, with an attitude. His girls enjoyed their hold on men and liked to show how they could herd them around like a
sheepdog. This group of Asian men hadn't taken that well and almost constantly Larry was interposing himself in between a stripper and a drunken patron. Then occasionally, one of his security guards was in the mix.

He loved Tiny like a son but this man-mountain could be trying at times. It was funny that someone who looked like a cross between a low land gorilla and a small house could be such a pain in the ass.

Tiny thought of himself as the girl's den mother, especially when some yokel put their hands on one of them; Tiny tended to react negatively.


I have two criticisms of The Watchers. First of all, Mr. Archer needs a better editor. When you’re getting turned on, you don’t want to be distracted by grammar errors or excessive word repetition. Okay, maybe most readers won’t notice these things the way an author like me does, but this kind of problem decreases my personal enjoyment. One particularly egregious error was the fact that the author refers to Theresa by her name, in a scene told from Gene’s point of view, before he has actually recognized the woman as his wife.

Second, I wasn’t very happy with the ending. The final chapter brings Gene and Theresa together for confessions and of course sex. All of a sudden, Theresa changes from a sweet, eager slut to something of a bitch. She lays down the law to Gene, telling him she’s going to give herself to “the Bull” (Larry) and leave him with sloppy seconds. Gene will have to live with being a cuckold, or live without her.

Her behavior struck me as extremely out of character. It also spoiled the “feel good” atmosphere of the rest of the book. I don’t like abuse mixed in with my sex. One reason I enjoy Mr. Archer’s stories is that everyone ends up satisfied. In this case, Gene likes to watch his wife with other guys but he is not, fundamentally, a guy who gets off being cuckolded. Yet he’s being forced into that role. It was as if the author all of a sudden remembered that this story had been labeled as a “cuckold” tale and stuck this ending on as an afterthought.

Overall, though, I enjoyed this over-the-top erotic romp. If you’re in the mood for light-hearted, no holds (or holes!) barred sex, pick up a copy of The Watchers.