Thursday, October 8, 2026

Every story hides a secret long buried – #SpeculativeFiction #HistoricalFiction #Giveaway

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Blurb

On the eve of President John F. Kennedy's final trip to Dallas, an irreverent narrator from the Ether begins to reveal the hidden chain of events that history never recorded. Spanning decades and weaving together Hollywood legends, political dynasties, secret affairs, and forgotten tragedies, Coincidence imagines how seemingly unrelated lives become entangled in the most infamous assassination of the twentieth century. From Joseph P. Kennedy and Gloria Swanson to Jackie Kennedy, Mary Pinchot Meyer, and the young Lee Harvey Oswald, every choice, passion, and betrayal sends ripples through time. Behind every headline lies another story, and every story hides a secret long buried. As the strands converge on November 22, 1963, the line between fate and accident begins to blur. Rich in historical detail and provocative speculation, Coincidence asks: was it really coincidence at all?

A quick conversation with the author

Lisabet Sarai: How do you handle the fact that modern readers are probably unfamiliar with many historical personages you have cast in your historical or alt-historical fiction?

Jon Ketzner: Well, first, I think part of the fun of reading historical fiction is deducing which characters and events are actually historically verifiable and which are fictional supplements added by the author to sex up the narrative. In Coincidence, I have characters who are historical well-knowns, especially to Baby Boomers and the huge crowd of Kennedy assassination obsessives, conspiracists, and groupies. I also have characters who are fictional stand-ins for real folks or composites of real folks. For example, Billy and Sharman are pretty obviously stand-ins for F. Scott and Zelda Fitzgerald. Then there is an army of fictional characters whose story arcs weave in and through the historical record. Many of these characters have names the same or similar to friends and relatives of mine. These people are so thrilled to be included they often buy multiple copies of the book and give them out as gifts, having signed the pages where they appear. 

Do I sweat the fact that many modern readers have no clue who the Fitzgeralds were or the breathtakingly fascinating Mary Pinchot Meyer? Not really. First anyone with an I-phone can quickly get a tidy Google bio of the real characters. AI does much of the heavy lifting now in tracking down the bios and anecdotes about these people. Reading an historical novel probably implies that the reader has a high sense of curiosity about the individuals and events covered by the fictional take on real history. If I can whet their appetites for doing some off-line research about people they stumble upon in my story then I make no apology for that. I certainly operate that way in my consumption of historical fiction. The challenge, of course, is to make these long dead folks so compelling that a reader will want to learn more about them. As a writer I generally only want to cast historical figures who were demonstrably interesting or have the potential to be plausibly written that way.

I trust the intelligence and curiosity of my readers to not make me slog down the story narrative with asides and tortured, unnatural dialogue putting meat on the bones of historical characters. I hope the actions assigned by my storytelling will adequately reveal their real selves without tired expository paragraphs adding to the novel's word count. These are readers of historical fiction...amateur historians essentially...not readers of fantasies or bodice busting romances...they'll do the necessary heavy lifting to educate themselves about interesting but previously unknown historical characters. My job is to tweak their curiosity through my dialogue and atmosphere.

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Excerpt

Jackie rarely consulted him about her clothing. Her sense of style, if not her sense of humor, was notorious.

“The pink.”

She seemed surprised. “Why the pink?”

“Texas. All those tired cowgirls raising their brat kids to be Miss America. They adore pink in Texas.”

The First Lady eyed the pink at arm’s length. She shrugged. “Okay. The pink.”

“But the hat,” POTUS said, “could you do without the hat. I hate those things.”

Jackie shook her head.

“I’ll need the hat. Without the bubble top on, my hair would be a mess.”

The president leaned back against the pillows on his rock-hard bed, supine in his boxers and the argyles Bobby had given him which bore the presidential seal. He grinned.

“Remember the times when we would drift down the Potomac, standing by the rail, the wind blowing wildly through your hair, and there on the river in the middle of the city you would sink sexily to your knees…”

“Drop dead, Mr. President.” Words Jackie would soon want back.

The door to Suite 850 opened and George Lapp entered to help The President dress. He nodded at Jackie. He had seen her naked many times and was indifferent to the marital scenario into which he had strolled. Jackie smiled curtly and sidled toward her own room to don the pink Chanel, including its matching hat.

Before she left, the President grinned and said to his valet. “I might need the back brace today, George, had a strenuous night.”

About the Author

Jon Ketzner was born in Cumberland, Maryland in the lovely Appalachian foothills. He grew up in Baltimore then graduated from Towson University with a degree in mathematics and went on to a long career as a consulting actuary. For many years, Jon and his family lived in Bryn Mawr, Pennsylvania before moving back to Cumberland in 1990.

As a recovering actuary and inspired by the Maryland Writers Association’s “Notable Authors” monthly challenges, Jon decided to try his hand at writing and give his left-brain side a rest. He cites as influences: Henry Fielding, Joseph Heller, Gregory McDonald, and Tim Dorsey.

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Jon Ketzner will be awarding a $25 Amazon/BN gift card to a randomly drawn winner.

 

Wednesday, October 7, 2026

What could possibly go wrong? – #99Cents #ParanormalRomance #MFRWHooks

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My hook for today’s MFRW Book Hooks hop comes from one of the books I’m featuring during my Month of Magic – Fangs, Fur and the Single Girl. This full-length paranormal romance is on sale for only 99 cents, for the entire month. Grab a copy while you can.

Blurb

A tragically attractive vampire, a hunky wolf-man and a skeptical but susceptible career gal. What could possibly go wrong?

Bianca Sorenson understands obsession. Her phenomenally successful Vamp magazine feeds the popular fascination with the undead. The city is full of fanatics who want to believe vampires are real. Bianca knows that’s a fantasy. Then a blond, blue-eyed blood drinker walks into her office looking for a model’s job and turns her universe upside down. Jim Bush hasn’t been a vampire for long, but his terrible history and seductive hunger undermine Bianca’s single-minded ambition and her cherished self-control.

Trying to escape from Jim’s disturbing influence, she collides with a shaggy giant of a man whose mere presence inspires irresistible lust. When Zack Kane reveals that he’s a wolf shifter and claims Bianca as his mate, she finds herself on the horns of a supernatural dilemma. How can she resolve her feelings for her two mutually hostile lovers while defusing a city-wide conflict between the vampire clique and the werewolf pack?

Fans of Twilight: get ready for a wilder ride than you ever imagined!

 

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The Hook

Bianca strode north along 6th Avenue at her usual brisk pace. There was no sign of the blond vampire on the crowded sidewalk. Of course, someone like him, ultra-normal in his looks and style, would blend easily into the mass of homeward-bound New Yorkers. In any case, he’d already shown her how rapidly he could move. He might be blocks, even miles away by now.

The whole incident had left her deeply unsettled. Was it all a hoax? Had she allowed her imagination to get the better of her? Vampires did not exist. Yet the barely perceptible throb of her wounded wrist as well as the more pronounced pulsing in her clit testified to Jim’s reality.

God, she wanted him! Forget about the vampire stuff—she just wanted his mouth on hers again, his hands cupping her breasts, his cock buried between her thighs. Arousal buzzed through her entire body. She sweated under her heavy cape, despite the dank harbor breeze that swept the streets. The drenched crotch of her tights clung to her skin, an uncomfortable reminder of her horniness. Her nipples felt tight enough to shatter at a touch. If she didn’t get home to her vibrator soon, she’d explode.

Hoping against hope, she continued to scan the crowd as she hurried toward the subway. Meanwhile her mind replayed the scene in her office, as if by recreating the bizarre and thrilling experience she might come to understand it.

Wait a minute—that guy in the tan-colored coat, across the street, half a block ahead—could it be…?

“Umph!”

Something—someone—slammed into her chest, driving the air from her lungs. She stumbled, tripped on a high heel, and collapsed backward. Her butt landed hard on the pavement, the force rattling her bones. Instinctively, she extended her hands behind her to break the fall. Rough concrete tore at her palms. Dazed and trying to catch her breath, she sat there on the cold sidewalk for a full minute before she looked up.

A figure loomed over her, a mountain of a man with shaggy dark hair and a beard that partially hid his face. Despite the chilly evening, he was in shirtsleeves. He lowered himself to his haunches to peer at her, almost as though he’d never seen a woman before.

“You okay?”

“I—I think so.” She sat up and flexed her lacerated hands, wincing at the sting. “I’m sure my rear end will be black and blue tomorrow. You should watch where you’re going.”

“I could say the same about you, lady.” Rising to his feet with a grace that belied his bulk, he extended a massive paw. “Here. Can you stand?”

“Um—ow!—I guess.” Taking hold of his proffered hand, Bianca tucked her knees to one side, then tried to get up. “Oh damn!” she exclaimed as her right boot skidded out from under her. “My heel’s broken.”

The man caught her by the arm before she hit the ground again. “You’re lucky it wasn’t your leg.” He stabilized her while she bent to retrieve her shoulder bag and brushed the dirt from her clothing. “You’re bleeding,” he added. “Need to disinfect those scrapes. C’mon.”

“No, that’s all right. I’ve got to get home.” Even as she protested, she realized that between her bruises and her missing heel, she could barely walk.

The stranger swung his right arm around her waist. She leaned against his side, grateful for the support. He used his left hand to grab a bulky sack he’d obviously been carrying when they’d collided. He flung that over his other shoulder, as though it weighed nothing.

“My shop’s close. Over on Christopher. I’ve got betadine and bandages.” Without waiting for her acquiescence, he headed in that direction, forcing her to limp along beside him.

“Wait! Please! Just get me a cab. I appreciate your help, but really, I can manage on my own…”

He ignored her. She might as well have been talking to the brick wall he felt like when she’d smashed into him.

 

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Monday, October 5, 2026

Meet Ángel Rascón – #NewRelease #DarkRomance #99cents

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Tomorrow is release day for the latest book in Amber Daulton’s intense, sultry dark romance series the Lozano Cartel. To give you a better sense of this book, I’ve got an interview with the hero – or maybe anti-hero would be more appropriate. Read on for a peek into his world and his heart, plus all the details about where you can get your own copy. It's available for only 99 cents, for a limited time!

 

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What’s your name, and who are you in your world?

I’m Ángel Rascón, an enforcer for the Lozano Cartel.

Give us a visual. What do you look like?

Dark hair, dark eyes, dark personality. You get my drift.

What time period and location does your story take place?

Present day in Hermosillo, Sonora.

What’s your goal in this story?

Stay alive long enough to fix the mess Raul created. Protect Marisol from the fallout. My goal isn’t noble. It’s survival—hers and mine. If I have to burn every bridge I’ve ever stood on to keep her safe, I will.

What conflicts are you facing?

My crew wants Raul. The cartel wants blood. Marisol wants a normal life. I’m stuck in the middle, trying to keep her out of a war she never asked for. Every choice I make pulls me deeper into the kind of violence she shouldn’t witness. And I’m not sure I can climb out of it without losing her.

Your biggest fear is…?

Losing Marisol. I don’t fear death or the cartel. I’ve made my peace with that. But the idea of losing the one person who understands and accepts me for who I am scares the hell out of me.

What do you want that you know you shouldn’t?

Peace. A life that isn’t built on violence. A future where Marisol chooses me without fear or obligation. I want all of it, and I know I don’t deserve any of it.

Any regrets?

Not many. I’m content with my life, as screwed up as it is. However, I regret that I let Marisol’s brother, Raul, drag her into danger. I should’ve seen it coming. I should’ve stopped him before he stole 100k from the cartel. I knew he was on a downward spiral, but I didn’t step in to help him through his addictions. I was a shit-poor friend, and my inaction nearly cost Marisol her life.

Do you have any secrets?

Is that a trick question? Of course, I do. Lots. And no, I won’t tell you. I don’t want to kill you. But I will say this—some people may think I fell for Marisol because she saved me. That’s the farthest thing from the truth. I fell for her because she didn’t shy away from the gore when I was bleeding out on the sidewalk. She didn’t treat me like a monster. She helped me like I was a man worth saving. My biggest secret is this then—I want her to keep believing in me, to keep accepting me, flaws and all.

What is people’s first impression of you?

They think I’m dangerous. They’re right. I don’t soften my edges for anyone. I don’t pretend to be harmless. Most people keep their distance, and that suits me fine. The ones who don’t—like Marisol—change everything.

Do you see morality as black-and-white, or with shades of gray?

Morality is a luxury. People with safe lives get to debate right and wrong. In my world, you do what keeps you breathing. You protect the people who matter. You eliminate the threats. If that makes me gray, then I’m gray. But I don’t lose sleep over it.

What do you normally wear when you leave home?

Dark clothes. Nothing that draws attention. Nothing that reflects light. Henleys and chinos are my go-to. Boots, too, thick leather ones that can handle dirt, pavement, or blood. At night in the winter, I’m always wearing a denim jacket, which is heavy enough to hide weapons and light enough to move fast.

What’s your quirkiest habit?

I count exits. Every room, every building, every street. I track escape routes even when I don’t need them. It’s automatic—muscle memory from years of staying alive.

Why do you think Amber, your author, chose to write about you?

I wasn’t supposed to be anything more than a background character in someone else’s story. But after I was shot in Corrupting His Wife, something shifted. I didn’t stay quiet. I didn’t fade out. I had more to say, and Amber heard it.

My romance with Marisol isn’t clean. It isn’t soft. It’s not a damn Hallmark movie. There’s obsession in it. Darkness. Stalking. Lines crossed that shouldn’t be crossed. But Mari and I, we’re damaged enough that a safer beginning wouldn’t have worked. We needed the danger. We needed the wrongness. We needed the kind of collision that only happens when two broken people find each other at the exact worst moment.

That’s why Amber wrote me.

Because I demanded it.

And because Marisol and I were never meant to be ordinary.

Anything else you’d like to add?

Readers, now is your chance to request Breaking Her Enforcer for FREE. Believe me, it’s worth your time. All you gotta do is review it. Click either link below for more details. Otherwise, reserve your copy for 99 cents while it’s on PREORDER.

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Adios, amigos.

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Blurb

A drive-by shooting lands him in the hospital. And in the arms of temptation.

Cartel enforcer Ángel Rascón knows he should stay away from the woman who saved his life. Marisol is a sensual blend of fire and innocence, irresistible to his inner beast. She’s also the little sister of a man now on the run from the cartel—Ángel’s friend and former partner. Getting involved with her could destroy everything he’s worked for, but when she’s threatened, it’s game on.

Physical therapist Marisol Cruz knows Ángel is dangerous, yet he’s always there. Watching. Waiting. Wanting. After her brother’s enemies track her down, Ángel appoints himself her protector with every intoxicating kiss.

Ángel will have to risk his position—and his life—to keep her safe. But Marisol faces the most devastating choice of all. Loving her stubborn enforcer may mean losing her brother forever.

– Book 3.5 in the dark romance series, The Lozano Cartel. All the books can be read as a standalone, but are part of an interconnected series.

– Scenes featuring gang violence and suicide may be uncomfortable for some readers.

– No cheating. HEA guaranteed!

Excerpt

Ángel latched the squeaky iron gate behind him and crept across Marisol’s darkened front yard. The soothing droll of crickets masked the sound of his footsteps while the overgrown trees, shrubs, and cacti at the far property line shielded him from any nosy neighbors. Not that she had any in this quiet, working-class neighborhood on the city’s outskirts. As he braced himself against the side of her house, the rough stucco scraped his jacket and the back of his head as it always did. Yellow light poured from the living room window in horizontal beams as though to expose him.

Fuck that. He wasn’t an amateur.

Faint music seeped from inside the house.

He smirked, willing to bet his bank account that Marisol was streaming reruns of her favorite telenovela. Desperate for a glimpse of her, he pressed closer toward the glass pane and peered through the slatted blinds.

Inside, Marisol was bundled under a thick red-and-green checkered quilt on the sofa and cheered like a love-struck teenager over something that happened on the TV.

Damn right. He knew his woman well. From the high-stakes story lines to the nineteenth-century period costumes, Las Sombras del Imperio had found its way into countless living rooms across the country. Including his own.

After the program ended, Marisol turned off the television and grabbed her dinner plate and glass.

He darted around the house and ducked under a mesquite branch in the side yard. The crisp breeze rustled through the leafy branches, swept back his hair, and chilled his skin. Gritting his teeth, he huddled deeper into his denim jacket. His thick, cable-knit shirt caught against the hard ridge over his collarbone, irritating the taut skin. A deep, metallic chill radiated from the inside out, numbing the fracture site with a dull ache. He yanked the collar away from his neck and cursed.

Light now streamed out from the kitchen window.

As the rambunctious mutt next door yapped at something stirring in the bushes, Marisol peered out the glass into the darkness. Fine lines crimped her face.

Ángel slunk deeper into the shadowy foliage. Once she focused on washing the dishes, he swiped a branch out of his way and rolled his tight, sore shoulders. A low grunt tore from his mouth.

Distant laughter rang out, disrupting the tranquility of the night.

He tsked, shaking his head. The university-aged kids who lived in that dingy house at the end of the street were partying again. It was only Thursday, for fuck’s sake. Sighing, he pinched the bridge of his nose. As if he had any room to judge. At twenty-eight years old, he’d surely partied harder than those guys down the block could imagine.

He pulled his phone from his jeans back pocket and checked his notifications. Nothing from Raul. Or Muniz. What the hell was going on with them? He slid the cell back in.

A crash echoed from the other side of the house.

Ángel jerked upright.

Marisol flung her dish towel aside and raced out of the kitchen.

“Mierda,” Ángel dashed back around the house and snatched his gun from his hip holster. His pulse thundered in his ears. Icy dread slashed through his stomach.

The front door hung open.

“Get out!” Marisol shouted from inside. Something shattered. “Get out of my house!”

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About the Author

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Amber Daulton writes raw, edgy romantic suspense and dark cartel romance featuring high stakes, deep passion, and defiant hearts. She’s the author of the Lozano Cartel, Arresting Onyx, Embracing You, and Ramseys in Time series, as well as a rich catalog of standalone novellas. Her books are available worldwide in digital, print, and select audio formats.

From her home base in North Carolina, she builds dangerous criminal underworlds and maps out fierce, second-chance love stories alongside her supportive husband and her demanding feline writing assistant, Zita.

Amber Daulton is the author of the Lozano Cartel, the Arresting Onyx, the Embracing You, and the Ramseys in Time series, as well as several standalone novellas. Her books are available in ebook and print on demand while select titles are in audio and foreign language formats.

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Thursday, October 1, 2026

Welcome to my Month of Magic! #99Cents #Giveaway #Halloween

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You don’t need to spend much time with me to learn that Halloween is my absolute favorite holiday—a fact that tends to make October my favorite month.

So I usually do some something special to mark the occasion. Today, October 1st, marks the first day of my Month of Magic. Throughout October I will have lots of treats for you. To start with, I’ve discounted four of my favorite paranormal titles to only 99 cents for the entire month. This includes my full length vampire/werewolf romance novel Fangs, Fur and the Single Girl.

If you’re getting into the Halloween mood yourself, grab yourself one of these deals!

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A tragically attractive vampire, a hunky wolf-man and a skeptical but susceptible career gal. What could possibly go wrong?

Bianca Sorenson understands obsession. Her phenomenally successful Vamp magazine feeds the popular fascination with the undead. The city is full of fanatics who want to believe vampires are real. Bianca knows that’s a fantasy. Then a blond, blue-eyed blood drinker walks into her office looking for a model’s job and turns her universe upside down. Jim Bush hasn’t been a vampire for long, but his terrible history and seductive hunger undermine Bianca’s single-minded ambition and her cherished self-control.

Trying to escape from Jim’s disturbing influence, she collides with a shaggy giant of a man whose mere presence inspires irresistible lust. When Zack Kane reveals that he’s a wolf shifter and claims Bianca as his mate, she finds herself on the horns of a supernatural dilemma. How can she resolve her feelings for her two mutually hostile lovers while defusing a city-wide conflict between the vampire clique and the werewolf pack?

Fans of Twilight: get ready for a wilder ride than you ever imagined!

Buy links: https://www.lisabetsarai.com/fangsfurbook.html


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Bitter and alone, Etienne de Rémorcy haunts the forest around the ruined plantation of Fin d'Espoir. He has sworn to never again taste human blood. Then a fierce storm and a runaway horse bring a slender, raven-haired beauty to his lair. When she begs him to take her, he cannot resist.

Madeleine and Troy hope that a carefree vacation in tropical Jamaica will reignite their faded passion. On a mountain trail ride, Maddy's horse bolts, carrying her deep into the jungle. Injured and lost, she is saved by a giant of a man whose mere presence kindles unbearable desire. By the time she understands his dark nature, it is far too late for her to escape.

When Maddy returns, Troy finds her greatly changed: ravenous in bed, restless and disturbed otherwise. The elegant stranger he meets on the beach holds the key to her transformation - and soon has seduced Troy as well.

Tortured by his conscience, Etienne is determined to set the young couple free. But their love may be his last hope for redemption.

Buy links: https://www.lisabetsarai.com/findespoirbook.html

 

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I am who I am, and I know what you want.

Rebecca believes in magic. She has never lost her childhood love of Halloween, when she can don a costume and step away from her boring, ordinary self. For one night, she transforms into someone else – someone mysterious, daring, sensual and seductive.

When All Hallow’s Eve finds her stranded at a seedy motel a hundred miles from her friend's annual party, she is desperately disappointed. Then she discovers that her room is haunted by the invisible but unquestionably virile ghost of a rake who seduced local women nearly half a century earlier.

Buy links: https://www.lisabetsarai.com/rendezvousbook.html


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Enter the fourth world - a world of lust and shadows, where anything can happen.

Obsessive passion and dark ecstasy mark these nine stories of paranormal desire. An undead couple hunts for beauty and youth in the history-drenched streets of Prague. A sex addict meets his fate in the embrace of a seductive monster. An innocent writer offers her body and heart to a century-old ghost. A spiritual seeker succumbs to temptation in the arms of a fearsome and greedy goddess. A kinky, blood-drenched threesome unfolds in a luxurious Bangkok penthouse. These tales conjure the magic of sex, and its dangers. Expect to be unbearably aroused and occasionally terrified. Do not expect happily ever afters.

Warnings: This collection includes violence, blood, death, extreme BDSM, and some M/M interaction.

Buy links: https://www.lisabetsarai.com/fourthworldbook.html

All four books are just 99 cents each at all stores, between now and Halloween!


Wednesday, September 30, 2026

Do you believe in magic? – #Halloween #Paranormal #MFRWHooks

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It’s not quite October—not quite!—but I’ve decided to start the month of magic a bit early, with an excerpt from Fourth World, a collection of my paranormal short fiction. The hook below comes from the story “Higher Power”. Myra is a struggling actress, recently arrived in San Francisco. Desperate for work, she applies to a job ad seeking a magician's assistant.

I’ll be putting this book on sale along with a variety of my other paranormal titles as part of my Month of Magic promotion. Stay tuned!

The Hook

I swallowed my regrets and turned my attention back to the magician. He still watched me as if he would strip away my masks and lay me bare. Suddenly, he reached out and with one blunt finger touched the little gold cross hanging around my neck.

“Are you a believer?” he asked. Memories shot through me—my childhood awe as I knelt under the cathedral arches; my first communion, colored light through the windows staining my bride-like finery; my mother dying of cancer, asking for my prayers.

“I’m not sure,” I replied. “I used to be, but now...”

“And what about magic?” he asked with that ironic half-smile on his full lips. “Do you believe in magic?”

My heartbeat inexplicably quickened. “I don’t know about that, either.”

“There is much in common between religion and magic. Both are grounded in faith and love. The essence is a trust in things unseen.” I thought this a peculiar observation from a practicing conjuror. Surely the essence of magic was manipulating expectations and perceptions. Show business. “I have something to show you,” he continued.

He removed the dusty velvet cloth shrouding what turned out to be a combination television and VCR, a pre-DVD relic. It must have already had a tape loaded. As soon as he hit the button, it began to play. “Watch closely,” he said.

It was a recording of one of his performances. At first, I did not recognize him. He was clad all in black, with glittering rhinestones at his collar and cuffs. He moved with a grace and economy that negated his bulk. There was no sound.

He offered a few deft sleight of hand tricks as warm up. Then he was joined by his assistant, a slender, raven-haired Latin beauty wearing a scarlet evening gown. How could I compare? I wondered. As if he heard my thoughts, he commented. “Roxanne. Exquisite, isn’t she?”

“What happened to her, that you need a new assistant?”

His face darkened. “She suffered an unfortunate—accident.”

Roxanne lay down on her back on a trestle table. The magician draped her with purple satin. He passed his hands over her, clearly speaking some incantation. The draped figure began to rise, until it hovered level with his chest. The mage then removed the table.

The illusion of levitation, I thought with some degree of smugness. Cleverly concealed wires.

But then the scenario began to veer from the standard. Magister Aleister whisked the drapery off Roxanne’s prone body. He picked up a full-length oval mirror and held it above the immobile figure, moving it up and down her body in a manner that would have effectively interrupted any possible attachment of cables from above. I could see her reflection in the glass, and faintly, a misting from her breath. Her eyes were closed. Then he crouched and moved the mirror underneath her, as if to prove that she was not supported from below. He released the mirror, and it hovered below her form, halfway between her body and the stage.

The mage now made some passes over his assistant, his hands elegant and evocative. Her body began to rotate. First, she floated in a lazy circle around the vertical axis, her head and feet changing places. Then, very slowly, she rolled over, so that she was facing downward, once more face-to-face with the mirror. The video was surprisingly clear. Again, I could see the signs of her breathing.

I was impressed. I could not understand how such a trick could be accomplished. What arrangement of wires or hidden frames could provide so many degrees of freedom? The next trick, however, amazed and horrified me.

The magician gestured and Roxanne floated to a standing position, her crystal slippers barely touching the ground. Her eyes were still closed. He did not wake her from her trance. Instead, he pulled from the wings a framework of wrought iron, rather like an oversized bird cage. It was hinged along one side. He opened it, pulled it around Roxanne’s body, and snapped it shut, then applied a padlock to the latch. I could almost hear the clang of metal on metal.

A heavy cable slithered down toward the stage from above. He fastened it to a loop on top of the cage, and gave an almost imperceptible signal. The cage, with Roxanne within, rose about a foot off the floor.

Now what? I wondered, as he disappeared offstage again. He returned with a rack of swords.

He was talking during the entire performance, though I could not read his lips well enough to determine what he was saying. He chose one of the blades and swished it through the air in a swashbuckling manner. Then he appeared to plunge it between the bars of the cage and through Roxanne’s body.

She did not flinch. She did not move. Aleister seized another sword, circled behind her, and impaled her from back to front. I could see the tip of the blade emerging from her body, just below her breasts. There was no blood.

I did not want to watch the rest of this performance. The illusion was too perfect, too disturbing. But I could not look away. The magician skewered her with a half a dozen more blades. He spun the cage in a circle so that the audience could see Roxanne from every angle. Unlike the usual sword gambit, there was no opaque box within which the assistant could hide or contort her body to avoid the sharp instruments. Everything was clearly, awfully visible.

Finally, Aleister removed the blades, with great care, in the opposite of the order in which he had inserted them. He lowered the cage to the ground, and clapped his hands once. Roxanne’s eyes flew open, and her lips curved in an enigmatic smile. Aleister unlocked the cage and handed her out of it as if it were a royal coach. They bowed deeply, in synchrony. Then the tape went blank.

My heart was pounding uncomfortably hard. The magician re-covered the television, then turned to me. “Well?” he asked, fixing me again with those unnerving eyes.

I took a deep breath and tried to meet his gaze. “That’s—unbelievable. Remarkable. Not to mention very creepy.”

“Convincing, isn’t it? Makes you wonder what kind of power I really have.” There was an edge to his politeness, the slightest hint of arrogance in his well-tempered voice. He smiled in a way that I suddenly saw as seductive. “Do you still want to audition?”

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Tuesday, September 29, 2026

Review Tuesday: The Origin of Pietas by Kayelle Allen -- #SpaceOpera #ScienceFiction #ReviewTuesday

The Origin of Pietas book cover

The Origin of Pietas (Bringer of Chaos #1) by Kayelle Allen

Romance Lives Forever Books, 2016

Open the novella The Origin of Pietas and you are dropped into the middle of a war. Humans created the immortal Ultras but distrust, envy and hatred have made the two races into bitter enemies. When treachery turns a supposed peace negotiation into a betrayal, the Ultra leader Pietas finds himself helpless, trapped in a suspension pod on a space ship without sustenance of any sort. Deprived of food, water, and air, he dies repeatedly, only to revive and suffer further agonies.

Still, he is not entirely alone. A human soldier—a “ghost” engineered to return to life each time he is killed—watches over Pietas’ pod and manages some minimal communication, though he’s unable to free the Ultra. Six, the soldier, should be Pietas’ mortal foe. However, compassion and admiration for the Ultra, along with a touch of rebellion against his own miserable fate, lead the ghost to protect Pietas. When they finally land on the planet of Sempervirians, Six nurses the skeletal, powerless Ultra back to health—at the same time giving him a crash course in the meaning of friendship and the importance of trust.

I’ve known Kayelle Allen for more than a decade and read quite a few of her books, almost all of which take place in the same universe—an enormous universe that spans galaxies, with personal histories going back thousands of years. Her immortal characters live multiple lives over time, sometimes adopting new identities. I’m in awe of her imagination and her world-building skill, not to mention her ability to keep track of thousands of details.

Pietas remains an important character in many of Ms. Allen’s books—the Immortal King of the Ultras, proud, arrogant, yet surprisingly vulnerable, feared even by his own people but craving a connection with others. The Origin of Pietas series attempts to show the forces that initially shaped his personality and that have continued to influence his behavior, including his early and unexpected friendship with Six.

The tale of that friendship offers a lot of emotional satisfaction. Unfortunately, I find myself unable to like Pietas at all. He blames his faults on his (admittedly horrible) family background and expects to be accepted as he is—no matter how rigid, arrogant, authoritarian and unreasonable that might be.

I know that many readers adore the ambiguity that defines Pietas. He actually needs love and friendship but is too stubborn and self-involved to bend and adapt to others. Six treats him with remarkable kindness, flexibility and humor. Pietas meets this initially with suspicion and later, it seemed to me, with only minimal gratitude.

Despite my personal reaction to Pietas, I have nothing but praise for the writing and the emotional complexity of this book. When I receive reviews of my own work that talk about how a reader could not relate to a character, I shrug. Tastes vary. I hope this review won’t stop others from meeting Pietas and sampling Ms. Allen’s universe. The number of five star reviews associated with this book suggests that I’m in the minority.