Thank
you so
much for
hosting
today,
Lisabet.
I'd like
to wish
you and
your
readers a
Happy
Holiday
filled with
all the
Blessings
of the
Season.
Today,
I've brought along, twins Siri and Iris, who decide to give their
husbands the ultimate gift — a festive spouse swap.
Here's
the blurb:
Meet
the
twins
who
take
share
and
share
alike
to
a
whole
new
level…
Separated
at the
age of
sixteen by
selfish
battling
parents
going
through a
bitter
divorce,
twin
sisters
Iris and
Siri
Beaulieu
vow to
never be
apart on
Christmas
Eve, which
is also
their
birthday.
Now
grown and
married and
perhaps a
bit bored
with their
husbands,
the twins
decide to
give each
other the
ultimate
birthday
present by
switching
identities.
And
one tipsy
Christmas
Eve leads
to a
twin swap
the
husbands
will never
forget.
Although
it’s
been
done,
many
times,
many
ways…
Merry
Christmas
to
you!
If
you decide to give this story a read and you enjoy the twins and
their hunky husbands—and I hope you do—you might be interested to
know, I'm working on a sequel.
When I started writing this
story, I intended for it to be, a simple smutty switcheroo with a
Christmassy setting. Some fun escapism for holiday-weary readers. But
as often happens, I found there was more to this story than I'd
originally planned and there's nothing simple about swapping spouses.
Especially when there is already a sister connection to begin with.
You'll have to tune into the sequel to find out how that plays out
and the aftermath that follows the twins and their hubbies.
I
also learned there is a fine line—at least in this genre—as to
writing sex scenes when there are siblings involved and there should
be zero arousal or attraction between the two. It's a no-no. That's a
whole other kettle. When I was working on this story, it never
occurred to me how it might be construed, until my lovely editor
pointed it out. Always learning.
Here
is the cut, unedited scene, from the original version of Xmas Spouse
Swap... which was just too taboo to keep in the story. Even after it
was pointed out to me, I still thought the way I wrote the scene, it
might still be passable. You be the judge.
“Hey
where are you two lovely ladies going?” Kyle called after
them.
“We’re going to put our jammies on,” Iris replied,
over her shoulder.
“I like the sound of that.” Kyle
grinned.
“I’ll just bet you do,” Iris shot
back.
“What’s not to like. Gorgeous twins, in lingerie. I
mean, come on.”
“Who said anything about
lingerie?”
“Well, a guy can dream, can’t he? Christmas
miracles and all that. You’re the one who says anything can happen
at Christmas.”
This time, Iris rolled her eyes.
“Crank
up the tunes, Ky,” Siri said. “We won’t be long.”
“You
see, why can’t Brett be more like Kyle?” Siri said, as soon as
she closed the bedroom door.
“Aren’t you being a bit hard
on him? You know sometimes, I’d like Kyle to be serious about
something. Anything, actually.”
“Maybe if we combined
them, we’d have a perfect man.” Siri rifled through her suitcase
and quickly changed into a deep burgundy colored chemise that barely
covered her ass or her breasts.
“Wow, am I gonna look plain
next to you,” Iris said.
“Why, what did you bring?” Siri
peered over.
“Shorts and tank top with candy canes and
gingerbread men on them.”
Siri rolled her eyes and tossed a
green nightie, in the same style, to her.
“I don’t know,
Sear, I’m not sure I feel comfortable parading around in front of
your husband…”
“Just say thank you and put it on, Eye.”
Siri said through clenched teeth.
As Iris changed, she said,
“Hmm, seems to me, Brett’s not the only one wound a little
tight.”
“You’ve no idea,” Siri responded. “Are you
ready?”
“Hand me your brush.” Iris combed her hair while
Siri merely scrunched her long blonde tresses with her
fingers.
“Here, don’t forget your hat.” Siri handed Iris
the red one.
“Mine’s the green one, remember?” Iris
corrected, with her hand out.
“Wait.” All of a sudden,
Siri stilled.
“I’m having trouble keeping up with your
mood swings here, Sear.”
“What if we…” Siri raked her
lip with her teeth.
“Oh no. I know that look. What are you
plotting and how is it going to get me in trouble.”
“No-no.
It’ll be fun. I promise!”
“I’ve heard that before.
Right before I got either grounded, earned detention, or got sent to
the principal’s office. Oh and once landed us in the back of a cop
car.”
“Oh stop. I meant well.” Siri grinned and Iris was
relieved to see a genuine smile on her sister’s face. She’d been
starting to get worried. Whatever she had planned, she’d probably
go along with, just to keep her smiling.
“So?” Iris
prompted.
Siri planted the green hat on her head. “Let’s
switch.”
Iris’ excitement, dimmed. “I… I don’t know,
Sear.”
“Oh come on, it’ll be fun!”
In her
opinion, it was asking for trouble with a capital T.
“There’s
no way, they’d fall for it, Siri, they know us too well.”
Her
sister’s shoulders sagged and for a moment Iris was about to
acquiesce.
“You’re probably right. Here take your silly
green hat.” She headed for the door with the red
one.
“Siri.”
Siri turned and held out her hand. The
excitement in her eyes was gone. “Let’s dance and rub all up on
our husbands. That was your suggestion, remember.” She opened the
door and dragged Iris with her.
“Check it out!” Kyle
cheered when he got an eye full of the two of them in their similar
low-cut, shorty nighties, topped off with the Santa hats.
“How
about a little holiday hoe-down, fellas?” Siri invited,
seductively, doing a full body roll.
“Merry freakin’
Christmas!” Kyle bellowed and cranked the music.
Siri seemed
to perk up at his exuberance.
“How about we give them a twin
show, they won’t ever forget.” Siri pressed up against Iris’
back and she tempted them, with the most sensually fluid arm
gestures, using her wrists and her fingers to beckon them closer.
“We'll get them so hot and horny they won't know what to do with
themselves."
Kyle
all but floated over to them. “What have we here?” He
placed one hand on Iris’ hip and his other on Siri’s and he began
to move with them rhythmically.
Both women sidled up to Kyle.
Greedily, he wrapped his arms around each of them.
“Fuck you
Brett, my Christmas wish came true!” he called. “I got both
Beaulieu sisters.”
For a few minutes, Brett sat in a chair
across the room, with his snifter of Brandy and simply watched the
girls dance provocatively with Kyle.
Iris couldn’t keep her
gaze from straying to Brett. Yes, he was keeping close tabs on his
wife and Kyle but Iris could also feel the heat and intensity of his
gaze on her as well. It made her want to move more sensually, just
for him.
“Your husband likes to watch,” Kyle said to
Siri.
“Indeed he does,” Siri replied in a sultry
voice.
For some reason the thought fascinated Iris.
Iris
pried her attention away from Brett to look at Kyle. His eyes were
heavy with arousal. He was definitely getting off on dancing with the
two of them. Siri was feeding off him too.
Wickedly, Iris
wanted Brett to take pleasure in them too.
“Come, Brett,
join us.” Iris tried to imitate the same dramatic gestures with her
arms as Siri had when calling Kyle over.
She was pleased when
Brett set his glass down and made his way over.
To her
delight, he didn’t immediately go to his wife, instead he placed
his hands at Iris’ waist and moved with her.
Gradually, the
guys moved in, practically sandwiching the twins between them. Iris
and Siri ended up, back to back.
Yet soon, Kyle, who was still
holding Siri, reached for Iris. Skimming with his hand, he followed
the curve of her neck and shoulder and part way down her arm. He then
detoured around front where he cupped her breast and fondled it. She
was both mortified and turned on at the same time. Especially when
Brett lowered his gaze and watched Kyle’s hand at work. Brett ever
so slowly trailed his hand up her side and rested his palm at the
side of her other breast. He caressed her side boob with his thumb.
The soft gesture sent the most delicious tendrils of sensation
straight to her pussy.
Iris had to bite her lip to keep from
moaning. Her nipples hardened to aching points as Brett and Kyle
double-teamed her. Yet she wanted more, much more. What would it be
like to be touched by both men at the same time? She tried to resist
the urge to fidget hoping to direct Brett’s hand where she craved
it most.
Not to be outdone, Siri turned her back to Kyle, yet
kept him close. Iris wondered if her sister could feel her husband’s
erection nudging her ass. For there was no doubt that all four of
them were equally aroused at their spontaneous play.
“Move
your hip just a smidge, Eye,” Siri whispered.
The flutter of
her warm breath on Iris’ neck, made her shudder, in the best
possible way.
Shamelessly, Siri reached around Iris and palmed
her husband’s cock through his trousers.
“Ohhh, aren’t
you nice and hard!” Siri crooned.
Iris fisted her hands. Her
fingers itched to touch him too, and find out for herself just how
hard he truly was.
Iris peered up at Brett, wondering at his
reaction.
But to her surprise, he wasn’t even looking at
Siri, his focus was squarely on her.
Siri chuckled. Iris was
sure the low devious sound went through them all. It certainly did
her.
“Seems Kyle isn’t the only man who has a twin
fetish.” Siri all but purred. She was enjoying this and not only in
the physical sense. She was pushing Iris right out of her comfort
zone and if she wasn’t mistaken, she was doing the same to
Brett.
Just when she thought there was nothing left Siri could
do to shock her, her sister proved her wrong. Siri lowered her head
and kissed a slow path up Iris’ neck.
Iris was more than
aware that she’d done it purely to excite the men, but in her
highly aroused state, it did crazy things to her, too.
“Oh,
god,” she murmured. Her eyes fluttered as she tried to maintain eye
contact with Brett. That connection in and of itself was stimulating
her on a whole other level. Yet what she really wanted to do, was let
her head fall back on Siri’s shoulder and let them all go at it.
A
nerve in Brett’s jaw ticked rapidly.
All of a sudden there
seemed to be a cacophony of heavy breathing assaulting her from all
sides, along with an orgy of hands.
Oh god,
yes!
Too
much? Yah or nay? Let me know your thoughts. If you want to find out
how the scene was finally adapted for approval, buy links are
provided below.
Thank
you again, for inviting me back to Beyond Romance, Lisabet!
Wishing
you all a Happy Christmas and a bright and prosperous 2018!
Cheers,
H
K
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About
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H
K Carlton
is a
multi-published
Canadian
author of
romance and
its varied
sub-genres.
From
naughty to
nice,
historical
to
contemporary,
time travel
to space
travel, and
everything
in between.
Variety
is
creativity’s
playground—It’s
where
you’ll
find me.
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